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Upon Further Review....

Okay, my novel's first chapter is not as bad as I thought. I did go back and edit (it's not against the rules), so now the opening isn't as terrible as it sounded at 1:00 a.m. Typically my prose dwells on what's happening, not describing the environment or what my characters are thinking, so I'm trying to put in more evocative descriptions. It's still a first draft...

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